平均绩点: 3.1
GMAT考试: 680
本科生: Psychology Major at Stanford
活动: Competitive swimmer in high school, volunteer swim coach
个人: Family originally from Mexico

概述: 我们的客户在大学毕业后的四年里被解雇了四次. 第四次是在提交申请的两个月前. 他害怕透露裁员的消息，并希望详细介绍他的各种工作，而不解释他的转变背后的原因.

结果: Admitted to Wharton with scholarship.

策略: 我们Recommendations我们的客户详细描述他的裁员经历，在这样做的过程中，他讲了一个故事，突出了几个非常积极的品质. 他有能力从每一次失望中成功地恢复过来并成长. 通过反思自己所犯的错误，他表现出成熟和自我意识, and through his ability to incorporate learnings. He also illustrated resourcefulness and drive, 他最终创造了自己的Entrepreneurship机会，成为实现未来目标的真正平台. 最终, 他Career的过山车成为一个很好的跳板，展示了许多非常积极的品质.

平均绩点: 3.4
GMAT考试: 730
本科生: University of Delaware
活动: 网球，马拉松，偶尔参与各种印度非营利组织
个人: Originally from India

概述: Our client was born and raised in India, and came to the US to earn his undergraduate degree in Engineering. 然后他去了一家大公司工作，在那里他进步了五年. Although he had solid work experience, 和数字, his demographics placed him in a highly competitive pool, where he really needed to find a way to differentiate.

结果: Admitted to Columbia, Tuck, and MIT.

策略: 许多印度申请者追求工程职业，他们的简历开始看起来都一样. 在与该客户合作的过程中，我们将重点从他日常工作的技术细节上移开，而强调他的管理和领导经验, which set him apart from many of his peers.

具体地说, 他带头发起了一项非营利倡议，并在办公室内获得了大量支持, ultimately raising significant funds, but also setting the stage for future office initiatives of this kind. He had also taken on a training role, 指导新员工，帮助制定培训计划的蓝图. 这两个职位都不是他正式工作描述的一部分，但它们突显了他的领导能力，并为他的简历增添了色彩.

平均绩点: 3.2
GMAT考试: 720
本科生: Economics major at mid-tier east coast college
活动: Involved in student government as an undergrad
个人: 我们的客户全家在他上大学前一年从亚洲搬来

概述: 我们的客户因为剽窃被大学休学，尽管他已经准备好去商学院了, 由于担心自己永远无法克服这一缺陷，他将MBA申请推迟了两个季度.

结果: Admitted to Wharton and Kellogg.

策略: Our client needed to approach the plagiarism issue head-on, explain what happened, 不要找借口, 并具体展示他是如何从这次经历中学习和成长的. 最初试图忽略事件或在附加信息文章中讨论它, we convinced him to tackle it in a full essay, as it was a pivotal event in his development.

他为自己的行为承担了全部责任，但也谈到了文化差异，以及他并不完全理解美国人对抄袭的看法. He discussed the emotional impact of his suspension, 这真的让他更人性化，这样广告主就能理解他的悔恨和尴尬了, the impact on his relationship with his family and his self-image. 然后，他讲述了自己是如何在修改学校荣誉守则的平台下当选为学校学生会成员的, 以及他随后采取的行动，以确保他所经历的事情不再发生.

Thus his story came full circle, 这个很大的缺陷被用来突出他的优点:他的个性, 自我意识, and a significant accomplishment.